11 January 2006

story about pirates

by Cecily


by Jamie, age 5




When the land was dark and violent, there was a lad.  He dreamed of becoming a sailor across the sea.  But he lived with pirates
When the land was dark and violent, there was a lad. He dreamed of becoming a sailor across the sea. But he lived with pirates.




But once he was hiding in the bushes and pirates were fighting on the grass
But once he was hiding in the bushes and pirates were fighting on the grass.




Then a ship was known to go into the ocean.  Then the lad was excited.  The captain said he could go.
Then a ship was known to go into the ocean. Then the lad was excited. The captain said he could go.




Chapter 1: The Lad Goes to Sea
Chapter 1: The Lad Goes to Sea




He was pulling on the rope
He was pulling on the rope




When the lad was out after doing his work, he wanted to go down below.  But just as he was going down the ladder, a pirate stepped into his way.

When the lad was out after doing his work, he wanted to go down below. But just as he was going down the ladder, a pirate stepped into his way.




And then the pirate tied him up and [put him] in his cabin.  And then he was going to stab the lad.  He was just drawing his sword...

And then the pirate tied him up and [put him] in his cabin. And then he was going to stab the lad. He was just drawing his sword...




Chapter 2: The Lad Escapes

Chapter 2: The Lad Escapes




Somebody yelled stop! and in a moment the lad had escaped and the pirate was overboard
Somebody yelled "STOP!" and in a moment the lad had escaped and the pirate was overboard.




Chapter 3: The Ship Sinks
Chapter 3: The Ship Sinks





One day when the wind was blowing so hard, the ship sunk. And they jumped onto the island, and the lad died.




The end.

3 comments:

  1. My favorite thing that Jamie ever said was (with intense longing in his voice) "I need.....SOMETHING"

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  2. MY favorite was (in the grocery store check-out line, when he was 2) "I want a milkshake and beer, beer, beer, RIGHT NOW!"

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  3. HAHAHA hi Cecily, Im lette from ore somewhatsilent!! this bloggie is the bestest read iv had in an age and that story was just beautiful, excellent!! keep up the excellent work!! and ur welcome over to my humble abode any time!! me own blog!

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    see u round dearie, lette :)

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